Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Formal Letter

9 Bar Ilan Street
Holon

January 28, 2010


The "Yeled" Organization
14 Borgen street

Haifa


Dear Sir/Madam,

I visited your web-site recently and I was really impressed. I think that your organization is doing a wonderful job with teenagers. I am writing you because I would like to volunteer in your organization. I believe that I could really assist your organization.

First of all, I used to volunteer in a youth movement named "Hazav". I volunteered there for 3 years and I worked with difficult children, and helped them as much as I could. My volunteering in "Hazav" was a life changing experience for me, and I learned a lot throughout these 3 years.

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Second of all, I am very connected to children and I am interested in helping and counseling other people. I am friendly, kind and generous, so this volunteering work is perfect for me.

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To conclude, I believe I can be very useful for your organization, and you won't be disappointed . I would be happy to come for an interview.

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I look forward to your reply.

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Yours truly,

Shany Raz

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