The Internet

The internet, the greatest invention of the 20^th century, includes Chartrooms, social networks, and unlimited sources of knowledge. The internet has changed our lives in many levels, made our lives easier, but at the same time a lot harder.

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On the one hand, the internet made our lives easier by letting us find almost everything in one place. It helps us communicate with other people, share and receive information. Moreover, the internet offers fun activities, everyone can spend spare time by(מיותר) enjoying the options the internet has to offer.

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On the other hand, the internet is a very dangerous place. It contains(ww.) many dangerous people, who can harm innocent children with no supervision. Furthermore, the internet exposes kids to violence and pornography, those things are very dangerous for children to be exposed to.

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To sum up, I believe that the internet is very important in our lives and has definitely changed them for the best, but we have to be careful and aware of all the dangers that this great thing Includes.

It's good, but a bit too general. You need to expand a little further.

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