Ms. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel high school
1 Mote Gur Street
Holon
Dear Madam,
Every year Kugel high school sends a group of 11th grade students on a journey to Poland. This trip is very significant to the students, and everyone probably wants to take part in it. However, not everyone can afford to go on that trip, because of the exaggerated price. I am writing to complain about the high price that prevents a lot of students from going out on that important journey.
First of all, the journey to Poland is very significant and important, and is something that every young jew has to go through, not just the financially capable ones. I believe that this journey is one more step for a child to become an adult. Therefore, I think that the school management must lower the exaggerated price, or at least give full scholarships for the unfortunate students, who cannot afford it.
Moreover, I believe there can be another way to lower the price, by government subsidies. The government should donate a large amount of money for that exalted purpose. As a result, the school management will be able to help the students that are not financially capable of going on that journey.
In conclusion, I believe that every 11th grade student must go on the important journey to Poland, which indicates the history of the Jewish people.I also believe that the Israeli government should support financially and help lower the price by subsidization or donation of money.
I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Shany Raz
This is much better.Great work!
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Daphna
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