First Writing Assignment

Hi. My name is Shany Raz and I would like to tell you a little bit about my self.
Well, first of all I'm 15 years old and I live in Holon. I was born in the United States in New York and I came to Israel when I was 3 years old. I'm the oldest child in my family, I have one brother, and one sister who was also born in the United States.

I have long brown hair, and brown eyes and I'm 1.68 meters tall.
I like sports, dancing, singing, playing on the computer and just spending time with my friends. I also like going to the beach, watching T.V and going to the mall. I love pets very much, especially dogs. I once had a parrot and fish but they died and we don’t have any pets since then.

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I volunteer in the Hazav youth group, it’s like the Boy scouts but better. I am a counselor there and it's really fun. On holidays, I usually go visit my family in Beer-Sheba or go on trips with my family. On the last summer vacation I went with my family to Europe (Germany, Switzerland).I had the best time ever! We went to a lot of amusement parks and we traveled a lot. It was so much fun.

When I meet my friends we usually go to the mall , we study together or we meet at my house.

School is very important to me and I like going there, because there I can meet my friends. But sometimes It can be really annoying going to school, because I need to get up early every morning and I hate getting up early. I like especially Math and English, and I also like chemistry and physics. This year I really hope to be good at school, because it’s very important to me, and I want to get good grades.

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Daphna.