In almost every school in the world the school uniform is compulsory . students have to wear uniforms. The reason must be that the schools administration wants their students to concentrate on their studies instead of their appearance or the they wear, and instead of trying to impress other students by the clothes they wear.
On the one hand, school uniform is important, and it has some advantage: all the students are equal, no body need to be concerned about what he/she wearing, and there is no discrimination. For example without school uniform same students might feel discriminated because they can't buy trademarks and they can't dress like the other students who can. Moreover school uniform economizes time in the morning because it is a waste of time to choose clothes that are good enough and that impress the other students.
On the other hand, clothes reflects what the students think, believe, love, hate, and etc.
To makes all the students wear the same cloths hurts their uniqueness, it means that everyone is he same and no one is special. For example they are some people who love to wear black clothes, big necklaces, and to paint their hair with different colors, compared with people that love to dress with big clothes, big hats and big shoes. With their clothes people express themselves and it is very important.
In my opinion school uniform is very important and crucial because students can concentrate on their studies instead of their appearance, and everybody is equal with no discrimination, and humiliation.
Saturday, June 6, 2009
Saturday, May 2, 2009
Bruge McCall
Burge McCall was a short, heavy-set man with a loud voice. Mrs. McCall was a tall, thin woman with black hair that was always parted in the middle and smoothed down. Burge McCall hated his wife, he didn't like the way she looked at him, it made him nervous. Mr. and Mrs. McCall got married from the wrong reasons, they didn’t loved each other and they never got along very well, they had a really bad relationship.
Mr. McCall had a lot of money but he never bought Mrs. McCall nice things, instead he bought nice things to other women. It made Mrs. McCall even madder at him. One day, when they were fighting, he slapped her on the face, and while she wiped her face she called him a "big rat".
One hot day when Burge McCall dropped into Sled Sather's drugstore, Sled told him that his wife had bought a pound of rat poison. When Burge fond out they had never been any rat problem in his house he began to worry. Burge began to treat his wife better, he was generous and nice to her, he took her to the movies and he even bought her an expensive sealskin coat.
At the end, Burge and Mrs. McCall were very happy, they loved each other and he even called her Honey. I really enjoyed reading the story, it was interesting to see how Mr. and Mrs. McCall became a happy and loving couple, instead of the hating couple they were. I think Mrs. McCall was very smart, she succeed to restore her marriage with no force and with no effort.
Mr. McCall had a lot of money but he never bought Mrs. McCall nice things, instead he bought nice things to other women. It made Mrs. McCall even madder at him. One day, when they were fighting, he slapped her on the face, and while she wiped her face she called him a "big rat".
One hot day when Burge McCall dropped into Sled Sather's drugstore, Sled told him that his wife had bought a pound of rat poison. When Burge fond out they had never been any rat problem in his house he began to worry. Burge began to treat his wife better, he was generous and nice to her, he took her to the movies and he even bought her an expensive sealskin coat.
At the end, Burge and Mrs. McCall were very happy, they loved each other and he even called her Honey. I really enjoyed reading the story, it was interesting to see how Mr. and Mrs. McCall became a happy and loving couple, instead of the hating couple they were. I think Mrs. McCall was very smart, she succeed to restore her marriage with no force and with no effort.
Thursday, April 23, 2009
Homework
Homework, is it necessary? Everyday students need to prepare homework. Sometimes teachers give too much homework that the students can't deal with and it makes them suffer .
That is the reason why students hate homework so much, and why some students try to cancel homework.
The truth is that homework can be really annoying sometimes and it can take all day long to finish them. But homework is very important, it helps the students understand the material better, and it helps the students study for testes. Preparing homework helps the students because it makes them practice the materiel that was taught in class. Without homework the students wouldn’t understand the material properly and they would forget the material between one class to another.
To conclude, I think that homework is necessary and important and I suggest all students to prepare homework properly because it would help them in the future.
A bit too short (only 3 paragraphs instead of 4), but it's not bad.
(75) Daphna.
That is the reason why students hate homework so much, and why some students try to cancel homework.
The truth is that homework can be really annoying sometimes and it can take all day long to finish them. But homework is very important, it helps the students understand the material better, and it helps the students study for testes. Preparing homework helps the students because it makes them practice the materiel that was taught in class. Without homework the students wouldn’t understand the material properly and they would forget the material between one class to another.
To conclude, I think that homework is necessary and important and I suggest all students to prepare homework properly because it would help them in the future.
A bit too short (only 3 paragraphs instead of 4), but it's not bad.
(75) Daphna.
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Daphna.
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Daphna.
Saturday, March 28, 2009
Space Exploration
People have always been curious, they always want to know everything. That's why people started to explore space. Space exploration is a fascinating, amazing thing, it is the fact that knowing almost everything is never enough.
On the one hand, space exploration is necessary and important for humanity. Because a lot of things had been discovered thanks to space exploration, and a lot of things had been invented thanks to space exploration, like sunglasses' lenses that are produced from the same material that NASA build spaceships. and that's one example of the benefit of space exploration.
On the other hand, space exploration is a terrible waste of money, time and effort. why not use all of that resources to improve the life on Erath instead of wasting all that to explore another planetand the money should be spent on on Earth inorder to make life better. Moreover, space exploration can be very dangerous, is it worth the risk? for example Ilan Ramon that died in an Accident During his return from space exploring.
To conclude, I would like to say that space exploration is an important and interesting thing, but it is not worth the risk of a man's life and I think we should first make the life for everyone on Erath better before we pass to other planet.
On the one hand, space exploration is necessary and important for humanity. Because a lot of things had been discovered thanks to space exploration, and a lot of things had been invented thanks to space exploration, like sunglasses' lenses that are produced from the same material that NASA build spaceships. and that's one example of the benefit of space exploration.
On the other hand, space exploration is a terrible waste of money, time and effort. why not use all of that resources to improve the life on Erath instead of wasting all that to explore another planetand the money should be spent on on Earth inorder to make life better. Moreover, space exploration can be very dangerous, is it worth the risk? for example Ilan Ramon that died in an Accident During his return from space exploring.
To conclude, I would like to say that space exploration is an important and interesting thing, but it is not worth the risk of a man's life and I think we should first make the life for everyone on Erath better before we pass to other planet.
Thursday, February 5, 2009
Peer pressure
Yesterday my class and I went to see a show about drugs. At the show there was a story about two boys and a girl that went to a club. One of the boys brought some drugs for them, so they have "more fun!" He and the girl took some right at the beginning but the other boy didn’t want to take some. In the end, the other boy took some because of peer pressure . At the end of the night, the boy was hospitalized in an emergency room.
This is one exampleof bad peer pressure.
In my opinion, peer pressure is not a good thing, usually your friend want you to do something you don’t want to, and that almost always ends badly. Peer pressure is something teenagers and people in general should avoid getting into. So why are teenagers giving in to peer pressure? Of course, the answer will be that they want to be popular, to be liked, to be admired. But, do they really think this is the way?
I think not, I think peer pressure is a bad thing and kids shouldn't give into peer pressure, because they can be pouplar if the be themselves too.
To conclude, I think that sometimes teenagers need to know how to say no! to protect them selves, and to be themselves and do what they want and not what their friends told them to.
This is one exampleof bad peer pressure.
In my opinion, peer pressure is not a good thing, usually your friend want you to do something you don’t want to, and that almost always ends badly. Peer pressure is something teenagers and people in general should avoid getting into. So why are teenagers giving in to peer pressure? Of course, the answer will be that they want to be popular, to be liked, to be admired. But, do they really think this is the way?
I think not, I think peer pressure is a bad thing and kids shouldn't give into peer pressure, because they can be pouplar if the be themselves too.
To conclude, I think that sometimes teenagers need to know how to say no! to protect them selves, and to be themselves and do what they want and not what their friends told them to.
Thursday, January 22, 2009
Letter Of Advice
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Dear Ronit.
I understand your dilemma. If you decide to be friends with Jill, you might lose your old friends, but if you don’t try, you will never know what can happen. Jill might be a very nice girl and a good friend, do you went to lose that?
Try to think about Jill, she is shy, she doesn't have any friends and she feels lonely. How would you feel if you havent any friends, no one to talk to when you are sad, and no one to be with? Maybe you should introduce her to your friends and they will like her too, or you can introduce her some other girls you know so she at least could have some friends.
To conclude, I suggest you follow your heart, it will never disappoint you. I promise you know what to do, try to be nice maybe your friends will follow your decisions.
Love,
Shany.
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