Homework, is it necessary? Everyday students need to prepare homework. Sometimes teachers give too much homework that the students can't deal with and it makes them suffer .
That is the reason why students hate homework so much, and why some students try to cancel homework.
The truth is that homework can be really annoying sometimes and it can take all day long to finish them. But homework is very important, it helps the students understand the material better, and it helps the students study for testes. Preparing homework helps the students because it makes them practice the materiel that was taught in class. Without homework the students wouldn’t understand the material properly and they would forget the material between one class to another.
To conclude, I think that homework is necessary and important and I suggest all students to prepare homework properly because it would help them in the future.
A bit too short (only 3 paragraphs instead of 4), but it's not bad.
(75) Daphna.
Thursday, April 23, 2009
In almost every school in the world (the)school uniform is compulsory . students have to wear uniforms,(Start a new sentence here) the reason must be that the schools administration want(gr.) their students to concentrate on their studies instead of their appearance or the cloth(es) they wear, and instead of trying to impress other students by the cloth(es) they wear.
Same may say that school uniform is good and crucial
On the one hand school uniform is
This looks very promising. Please complete your essay.
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Daphna.
Same may say that school uniform is good and crucial
On the one hand school uniform is
This looks very promising. Please complete your essay.
(30)
Daphna.
Saturday, March 28, 2009
Space Exploration
People have always been curious, they always want to know everything. That's why people started to explore space. Space exploration is a fascinating, amazing thing, it is the fact that knowing almost everything is never enough.
On the one hand, space exploration is necessary and important for humanity. Because a lot of things had been discovered thanks to space exploration, and a lot of things had been invented thanks to space exploration, like sunglasses' lenses that are produced from the same material that NASA build spaceships. and that's one example of the benefit of space exploration.
On the other hand, space exploration is a terrible waste of money, time and effort. why not use all of that resources to improve the life on Erath instead of wasting all that to explore another planetand the money should be spent on on Earth inorder to make life better. Moreover, space exploration can be very dangerous, is it worth the risk? for example Ilan Ramon that died in an Accident During his return from space exploring.
To conclude, I would like to say that space exploration is an important and interesting thing, but it is not worth the risk of a man's life and I think we should first make the life for everyone on Erath better before we pass to other planet.
On the one hand, space exploration is necessary and important for humanity. Because a lot of things had been discovered thanks to space exploration, and a lot of things had been invented thanks to space exploration, like sunglasses' lenses that are produced from the same material that NASA build spaceships. and that's one example of the benefit of space exploration.
On the other hand, space exploration is a terrible waste of money, time and effort. why not use all of that resources to improve the life on Erath instead of wasting all that to explore another planetand the money should be spent on on Earth inorder to make life better. Moreover, space exploration can be very dangerous, is it worth the risk? for example Ilan Ramon that died in an Accident During his return from space exploring.
To conclude, I would like to say that space exploration is an important and interesting thing, but it is not worth the risk of a man's life and I think we should first make the life for everyone on Erath better before we pass to other planet.
Thursday, February 5, 2009
Peer pressure
Yesterday my class and I went to see a show about drugs. At the show there was a story about two boys and a girl that went to a club. One of the boys brought some drugs for them, so they have "more fun!" He and the girl took some right at the beginning but the other boy didn’t want to take some. In the end, the other boy took some because of peer pressure . At the end of the night, the boy was hospitalized in an emergency room.
This is one exampleof bad peer pressure.
In my opinion, peer pressure is not a good thing, usually your friend want you to do something you don’t want to, and that almost always ends badly. Peer pressure is something teenagers and people in general should avoid getting into. So why are teenagers giving in to peer pressure? Of course, the answer will be that they want to be popular, to be liked, to be admired. But, do they really think this is the way?
I think not, I think peer pressure is a bad thing and kids shouldn't give into peer pressure, because they can be pouplar if the be themselves too.
To conclude, I think that sometimes teenagers need to know how to say no! to protect them selves, and to be themselves and do what they want and not what their friends told them to.
This is one exampleof bad peer pressure.
In my opinion, peer pressure is not a good thing, usually your friend want you to do something you don’t want to, and that almost always ends badly. Peer pressure is something teenagers and people in general should avoid getting into. So why are teenagers giving in to peer pressure? Of course, the answer will be that they want to be popular, to be liked, to be admired. But, do they really think this is the way?
I think not, I think peer pressure is a bad thing and kids shouldn't give into peer pressure, because they can be pouplar if the be themselves too.
To conclude, I think that sometimes teenagers need to know how to say no! to protect them selves, and to be themselves and do what they want and not what their friends told them to.
Thursday, January 22, 2009
Letter Of Advice
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Dear Ronit.
I understand your dilemma. If you decide to be friends with Jill, you might lose your old friends, but if you don’t try, you will never know what can happen. Jill might be a very nice girl and a good friend, do you went to lose that?
Try to think about Jill, she is shy, she doesn't have any friends and she feels lonely. How would you feel if you havent any friends, no one to talk to when you are sad, and no one to be with? Maybe you should introduce her to your friends and they will like her too, or you can introduce her some other girls you know so she at least could have some friends.
To conclude, I suggest you follow your heart, it will never disappoint you. I promise you know what to do, try to be nice maybe your friends will follow your decisions.
Love,
Shany.
Thursday, January 8, 2009
8 years
8 years,
For 8 years Innocent people in Sderot live in terror.
For 8 years Innocent people in Sderot live in Shelters, afraid to be attack by the Hamas's Rockets.
For 8 years over 3,278 Rockets have been soot towards Israel.
And the world in Silent.
Finally the government is doing something with this situation and now the world woke up!
The Israeli government wants pace,
Despite the Hamas that wants to destroy us!
For 8 years Innocent people in Sderot live in terror.
For 8 years Innocent people in Sderot live in Shelters, afraid to be attack by the Hamas's Rockets.
For 8 years over 3,278 Rockets have been soot towards Israel.
And the world in Silent.
Finally the government is doing something with this situation and now the world woke up!
The Israeli government wants pace,
Despite the Hamas that wants to destroy us!
Monday, December 22, 2008
Dear Hen,
Dear Hen,.......................................................................19/12/08
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Hi, how are you? I hope everything is fine at school, and everything.
How is everyone doing? Say hello to every one from me.
I'm sorry I haven't written you until now, I was too busy getting used to everything around here at the boarding school. It has been real fun until now, I met some new friends and I love everything around here.
You will never believe what amazing thing happened to me on my first week here. In this school we can choose one fun activity, well you know how much I love dancing…So I chose the dancing class. On our first lesson I saw him, he was the cutest boy ever. He has green eyes, brown hair and the most beautiful smile I have ever seen.
He looked into my eyes and we immediately fell in love. When the class ended he asked me out, and of course I said yes!
I think he is the one, but we should wait for the date first. Our date is tomorrow, I'm so looking forward to it. I can't wait.I don't know what to wear, you have to halp me!
Well, I hope everything will be just fine.
I miss you and can't wait to see you again.
Love you with all my heart,
Shany.
This is much better, Shany.
Daphna.
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Hi, how are you? I hope everything is fine at school, and everything.
How is everyone doing? Say hello to every one from me.
I'm sorry I haven't written you until now, I was too busy getting used to everything around here at the boarding school. It has been real fun until now, I met some new friends and I love everything around here.
You will never believe what amazing thing happened to me on my first week here. In this school we can choose one fun activity, well you know how much I love dancing…So I chose the dancing class. On our first lesson I saw him, he was the cutest boy ever. He has green eyes, brown hair and the most beautiful smile I have ever seen.
He looked into my eyes and we immediately fell in love. When the class ended he asked me out, and of course I said yes! I think he is the one, but we should wait for the date first. Our date is tomorrow, I'm so looking forward to it. I can't wait.I don't know what to wear, you have to halp me!
Well, I hope everything will be just fine.
I miss you and can't wait to see you again.
Love you with all my heart,
Shany.
This is much better, Shany.
Daphna.
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