Homework

Homework, is it necessary? Everyday students need to prepare homework. Sometimes teachers give too much homework that the students can't deal with and it makes them suffer .
That is the reason why students hate homework so much, and why some students try to cancel homework.

The truth is that homework can be really annoying sometimes and it can take all day long to finish them. But homework is very important, it helps the students understand the material better, and it helps the students study for testes. Preparing homework helps the students because it makes them practice the materiel that was taught in class. Without homework the students wouldn’t understand the material properly and they would forget the material between one class to another.

To conclude, I think that homework is necessary and important and I suggest all students to prepare homework properly because it would help them in the future.


A bit too short (only 3 paragraphs instead of 4), but it's not bad.
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In almost every school in the world (the)school uniform is compulsory . students have to wear uniforms,(Start a new sentence here) the reason must be that the schools administration want(gr.) their students to concentrate on their studies instead of their appearance or the cloth(es) they wear, and instead of trying to impress other students by the cloth(es) they wear.


Same may say that school uniform is good and crucial
On the one hand school uniform is

This looks very promising. Please complete your essay.
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Daphna.